Encore
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| Subject: My Last Few Signatures 2009-11-04, 23:34 | |
| These are the last few signatures I created a few months ago (I've sort of stopped with the GFX because I'm kind of busy). Here's one I made for a competition: One I made for a SOTW (Signature of the Week) on another forum (which won): My fail attempt at a vector: I would really like some of your criticism on these pieces. Thanks! | |
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yuseifudo33 Ra Yellow
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| Subject: Re: My Last Few Signatures 2009-11-04, 23:43 | |
| 6/10 8/10 5/10
first that effect on the back really sux cus dont really go with background or the render the blur on it sux,so trying fixing those mistake
second:its good but feels a little bit empty
last:i dont even know what to say | |
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svstar34 Tester
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| Subject: Re: My Last Few Signatures 2009-11-05, 00:09 | |
| 7/10 - the guy really stands out compared to the background and the back just doesnt really suit 8/10 - i agree with Yusei, it does feel a bit empty 6/10 - umm... im not sure of what your getting at | |
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Encore
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| Subject: Re: My Last Few Signatures 2009-11-06, 23:07 | |
| - svstar34 wrote:
- 7/10 - the guy really stands out compared to the background and the back just doesnt really suit
8/10 - i agree with Yusei, it does feel a bit empty 6/10 - umm... im not sure of what your getting at 1. It's supposed to be like a paintball match, but I guess I failed at it. He's supposed to stand out, since he's the focal. If he didn't, then the focus wouldn't be on the guy. Think of it as a picture with a bee on a flower. You want the focus to be on the bee and some of the parts of the flower which surround the bee, but not the background and the parts of the flower that aren't too close to the bee. You want the bee to be the first thing the person sees, since without the bee, the point of the picture would lessen. 2. Ikr! I was surprised I won that SOTW. 3. It's an abstract-ish vector. o-o Thanks for the feedback. :3 | |
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CatGirl Slifer Red
Number of posts : 174 Age : 32 Location : Heaven, then I decended into California
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| Subject: Re: My Last Few Signatures 2009-11-07, 01:57 | |
| 8/10 Fits the theme perfectly, because the war/army theme of the pictures and colors suit the atmosphere resulting a gruesome battle about to begin in this signature. Nice job. 9/10 I'd say magically graceful. The cool colors fit well with the mysterious stream aura. 5/10 Umm, I'm not too sure either. | |
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