Life/Damage Deck, aka "Fire Princess"

Hello. This is what I wish to be my main deck. (Or some other well put together female-themed deck. I thought of Amazons, but I'm not sure.)

Girls
Mystical Elf
Marie the Fallen One x2
Fire Princess x2
Cure Murmaid
Maiden of the Aqua
Lady Assailant of Flames
Princess of Tsurugi x2
Queen's Double x2
Crimson Sentry
Performance of Sword
Hibikime
Succubus Knight
Wingweaver
Dark Witch

Spells
Lightning Vortex x2
Share the Pain
Stop Defense x2
Block Attack
Commencement Dance
Black Pendant
Legendary Sword
Ribbon of Rebirth
Curse of Fiend
Nobleman of Crossout
Nobleman of Extermination

Traps
Gift of the Mystical Elf
Astral Barrier x2
Lightforce Sword
Numinous Healer x2
Negate Attack x2
Solemn Wishes
Tornado Wall
Bad Reaction to Simochi

Italics = Key Elements
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So if it wasn't evident enough, if I pretty much get my way, I gain a little over 1000 LP every turn while doing 500 damage or more every turn.

(Let's see... Cure Mermaid is x1, Marie the Fallen One is x2-3, Solemn Wishes is x4 (Depending if things stack up like that.) So that's about 2000 damage I deal a turn.)

Astral Barrier is there because of the huge evident (and possible) LP buffer. Plus the combination of Tornado Wall makes the direct attacks 0 anyway.
Bad Reaction to Simochi is there because of...backup. (I could probably add in some Opponent LP give cards like the gift box or something like that I suppose.)

Tornado Wall + Maiden of the Aqua = 0 LP Direct Damage. The sacrifice is taking up 4 S/T slots plus either the necklace or the legendary sword as equip.

The deck sounds good on paper, but when I play with it, it sucks. I can tell I have no real counter-support to prevent my cards from being destroyed.

So I kind of need help in refining it. Maybe I should get rid of the Nobleman in exchange for Heavy Storm or something like that I suppose.

here are some of my suggestions for now
-Wingweaver
-Share the pain
-Stop Defense x2
-Block Attack
-Nobleman of Crossout
-Nobleman of Extermination
-Negate Attack x1
-Legendary Sword

+Guardian Angel Joan
+Smashing Ground
+Enemy Controller x 3
+Heavy Storm
+Mystical Space Typhoon
+Mirror Force
+Mage Power

You need to get rid of Performance of Sword and Commencement Dance but i can't think of what to replace them with right now.

RYU888 wrote:

here are some of my suggestions for now
-Wingweaver
-Share the pain
-Stop Defense x2
-Block Attack
-Nobleman of Crossout
-Nobleman of Extermination
-Negate Attack x1
-Legendary Sword

+Guardian Angel Joan
+Smashing Ground
+Enemy Controller x 3
+Heavy Storm
+Mystical Space Typhoon
+Mirror Force
+Mage Power

You need to get rid of Performance of Sword and Commencement Dance but i can't think of what to replace them with right now.

i agree with ryu but:

- negate atack
+ dimensional prison

So I should get rid of both of my negate attacks, then? Or just one? You're both saying -1, so... I don't know if that's collected -2 or just -1 and then just the prison.

Edit: I went ahead and deleted Commencement Dance and Performance of Sword, along with both Negate Attacks, and I replaced them with the two cards you said, but also added a second Maiden of Aqua and a second Dimensional Prison.

Since your getting rid of two negate attks, but mortal only says to put one dimension, i suggest either putting in another, or placing in mirror force. I say go with mirror force though. Works out same as dimesional prison, but can really help against those swarms that is meta game today.

I would suggest other things for your deck, but im not familiar with this type of deck, sorry.

This is what I would suggest.

Monsters: 20

3x Marie the fallen one
3x Fire Princess
3x Cure Mermaid
2x Des Koala
2x Armageddon Knight
2x UFO Turtle
1x Marshmallon
2xRaging Flame Sprite
1x Neo Spacian Grand Mole
1x Lava Golem


Spells: 12

1x Level Limit - Area B
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Heavy Storm
1x Foolish Burial
1x Smashing Ground
2x Poison of the Old Man
2x Shrink
2x The Dark Door
1x Lighning Vortex


Traps: 8

1x Gravity bind
2x Bottomless
2x Nightmare Wheel
2x Dimensional Prison
1x Ojama trio

Well, I'd advise you to take away the maiden of the aqua, astral barrier tornado wall, since you won't often get a chance of using them corectly, if you want to protect your life points, I'd advise you to use gravity bind, level limit area B, messenger of peace, marshmallon or spirit reaper (they're not girls, but they're useful.) Your deck is not based on atacking, so those cards could be helpfull.

Also you should get rid of the normal monsters because they won't help you.

Waboku is better than negate atack because it can be chained to mistical space thyphoon or heavy storm.

Get rid of bad reaction to simochi black pendant, fiend's curse too.

Duelingk wrote:

Since your getting rid of two negate attks, but mortal only says to put one dimension, i suggest either putting in another, or placing in mirror force. I say go with mirror force though. Works out same as dimesional prison, but can really help against those swarms that is meta game today.

I would suggest other things for your deck, but im not familiar with this type of deck, sorry.

I kind of already did that, if you read my last post...
And I'll get rid of the maidens and all of the other stuff.

The non-girls better help out a lot..

Edit: I took the liberty to try out Hannibal's variation. It looks like it's going to be pretty good, so I hope it helps.

Edit the Second: After some thought, I decided to scrap this deck. I believe I will try and attempt to make another.

Thanks for all of your suggestions though.