The Dark Dust Spirit's Power(/Combos) [AW]

Wow very interesting i like this.
God Job

Nice! :O
Short and simple, just how it's supposed to be.
Good job Arlin.

The first table was hard to make though. o.o

Anyways, thanks ._. Hope that Ace will rate it soon, and i'll gain DC

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1.Today, I am here to explain the power of the card, "Dark Dust Spirit", a Spirit (As suggested by the name) Monster.
2. There are various combos for this card, the most noticeable is:
3. Yes, "Treeborn Frog", you can use its effect to make it return to the field, and, offer him as a tribute for "Dark Dust Spirit".
4. And Since he will return to your hand at the end of the turn, and "Treeborn Frog" will return to the field in your next standby phase, you can perform this combo multiple times.
5. In fact, with "Yubel" and another Monster on the field, you can offer that monster to summon "Dark Dust Spirit", who will then, destroy "Yubel" by its effect, and Special Summon "Yubel - Terror Incarnate".
6. Next to it, you can activate a "Battle Mania" to definitely
own your opponent, since both the monsters will have a good effect("Yubel") or high attack("Dark Dust Spirit").
This sentence doesn't really make sense to me, but it's probably just because I'm tired. In articles, try to avoid using "own(unless you're using it to mean possession), pwn, cream, etc. These make your article sound a bit less professional, if you understand what I mean.
7. Summon a Monster(If you don't already have a monster), pay 500 and use "Ultimate Offering", and tribute that monster for "Dark Dust Spirit", which will kill every Face-Up monster on your opponent's field.
This is a giant run-on sentence. It should be something like. "Summon a Monster (If you don't already have a monster), pay 500 life points, and use "Ultimate Offering". Then, tribute that monster for "Dark Dust Spirit", which will destroy every Face-Up monster on your opponent's side of the field."
8. Pay another 500 for other Monsters you want to summon, and attack your opponent, it will be a hard hit for him!
Another run-on sentence. "Pay another 500 life points for other monsters you want to summon, and attack your opponent; it will be a hard hit for him!"

Also, remember to insert a space between punctuation marks and the next letter.

I probably missed a lot, but that was from reading it quickly once. I'm doing this, while I should be doing homework. Haha..

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Length/Content: It is nice, concise, yet detailed. I would suggest making the pictures a little bit smaller so that reading the text would be a bit easier. Good job adding the list of combos. Also, I like how you added the description of the main card you are discussing, along with the credits.

Idea: Original. Few of the combos, such as the Treeborn Frog one, is pretty common, but overall very nice.

Organization: Very organized. Good job adding color.
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Overall Rating: 8/10

Review/Rating done.
+ 500 to Arlin

Aster Phoenix wrote:

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Lmao, Italy Flag

Anyways, thanks Aster, i thought this article was a complete 2/10 ._.