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Maximillion Pegasus
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PostSubject: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 04:45

My 3rd Signature Supreme-Jesse1

I think I need to work on the text and maybe the background. I'm still trying to work my way up and the comments provided have been helpful. Thank you Very Happy
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Kikyo Maaka
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 14:05

Again, bad resizing on the Judai and Johan renders (they look like they're one render though), and you probably could have found a better Ra render (it also looks like it's not resized right as well). Backgrounds a little dull, could have a bit more life to it. Text could be a little lighter, the font is fine though.

All in all, a 5/10.

http://www.thedesignworld.com/ <-- not sure if I mentioned it before, but a good idea might to see some tutorials seeing as you're still new to this. That site has some pretty good tuts there Very Happy
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Aster Phoenix
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 16:59

Nice job, although I agree that they were a bit badly resized. Also, the background is a bit dull. I think the signature as a whole is a bit too dark. You should lighten it up a little and make the text a bit more noticeable.
6/10

~Aster Phoenix
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Maximillion Pegasus
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 17:58

Heres an Edited version taking more of your very helpful comments into effect. Please comment again.

My 3rd Signature Supreme-Jesse1-1

kikyo thank you for that website it helped me quite a bit as I am still exploring the tutorials there.

Aster thank you as I tried to take most of your suggestions into consideration
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FullMetalAlchemist
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 18:04

Hmm. I still think the background is a bit too dark. Also, the bottom right of ra looks like it has nothing, except solid coloring. Although much better than the other one. You're getting better!
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Aster Phoenix
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 18:07

Well, the text is a lot better than before. Personally, I think the bottom right of Ra is a bit too bright now. Judai/Jaden and Johan/Jesse look better than they did before. Still a little blurry to me. Better than the first
7/10

~Aster Phoenix
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Kikyo Maaka
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 22:31

Looking better Smile Judai and Johan look okay now, same with Ra. Though on the side, Judai and Johan look ishly blurry, but meh Hmm Text is better, background looks a little more lively. You're improving, just keep working at it Very Happy 7/10
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PostSubject: Re: My 3rd Signature   My 3rd Signature Empty2009-06-07, 23:07

Here try this: http://www.marcofolio.net/photoshop/ultimate_photoshop_design_resources.html

Your getting better and better though! Very Happy
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