Macro Monrach Destiny KCVDS 1.15 (rate/ fix please)

so i had an idea to make a Macro Monarch deck with a twist. some Destiny Heros. but i think it might be a little much to handle. might work out though.

please give me your opinion and any help.

Monsters: 23
x3 Zaborg
x3 Mobius
x2 D - Hero Dasher
x2 D - Hero Malicious
x1 D - Hero Diamond Dude
x3 D - Hero Defender
x1 D - Hero Disc Commander
x1 E - Hero Stratos
x1 D.D. Assailant
x2 D.D. Survivor
x1 D.D. Warrior Lady
x3 D.D. Scout Plane

Spells: 10
x3 D - Draw
x2 Soul Exchange
x1 Lightning Vortex
x1 Reinforcement Of The Army
x1 Heavy Storm
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon
x1 Smashing Ground

Traps: 12
x2 Macro Cosmos
x2 Appropriate
x2 Dark Bribe
x2 Solemn Judgement
x2 Bottomless Trap Hole
x1 Mirror Force
x1 Return From The Different Dimmension



Side Deck:
x1 Different Dimmension Master
x1 D.D. Survivor
x1 D.D. Assailant
x2 D - Hero Fear Monger
x2 D - Hero Diamond Dude
x1 Lightning Vortex
x2 Book of Moon
x1 Different Dimension Gate
x2 Solemn Wishes
x1 Solemn Judgement
x1 Dark Bribe

Edit:

i just almost did an OTK with this deck

he was at 8000lp and i was at 3000lp. he had a marshmallon out and i had zaborg and mobius in my hand, and mobius, fear monger, dasher and malicous in the removed zone. actuvated return from the different dimmension, sacrificed malicious for zaborg, killed marshmallon and cut 7900lp out of him. (:

Edit: i switched fear monger in with a diamond dude and D.D. Assailant bacuse fear monger wasnt proving as much of a support.

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i just almost did an OTK with this deck

he was at 8000lp and i was at 3000lp. he had a marshmallon out and i had zaborg and mobius in my hand, and mobius, fear monger, dasher and malicous in the removed zone. actuvated return from the different dimmension, sacrificed malicious for zaborg, killed marshmallon and cut 7900lp out of him. (:

Don't double post,just edit your first post

I done that for you since you're a new member

Good deck anyways,and yeah,i done an OTK too with this,awesome

Congratulations for making this strong deck :O

hahah thanx. i didnt know it was that strong.