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ElenFNX Slifer Red
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Serbia
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| Subject: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-05, 20:34 | |
| This is first thing i ever made vith photoshop(and i made it few minutes ago) Well, maybe i'll change something later, but now is to late (2:33am) and i must sleep >.> Do you like it? | |
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Odion Slifer Red
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-05, 20:36 | |
| Its rlly good for your first time | |
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aj6666 Moderator
Number of posts : 822 Age : 33 Location : Mexico
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-05, 20:36 | |
| it looks good, but I think the BG should be darker. 5/10 | |
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JadenYuki1
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-05, 20:43 | |
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FullMetalAlchemist Ra Dorm Leader/Alchemical Master
Number of posts : 1859 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere on Earth
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-05, 20:44 | |
| I think it's good considering that it's your first time. I could never do something like that on try #1. | |
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Aster Phoenix Destiny Keeper
Number of posts : 3970 Age : 29 Location : You Don't Need To Know
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Grace Heaven's Girl
Number of posts : 1680 Location : The Heavens
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-05, 23:34 | |
| I like it a lot. ^^ Love the colors, although the text could've been a bit smaller, it's really filled up. xP And two renders isn't good, there should only be one, and add a more oceany effect, that way you'll be able to see everything. Other than that, great work! 6/10 | |
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Kikyo Maaka Lv1 Troll
Number of posts : 883 Age : 31 Location : Canada
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-06, 03:32 | |
| Err, for a first try I'll say good job, but you've got a bit of work to do ^^0 Background is almost the same color as the renders, so it could be darker. Text stands out a lot more than the renders. I'm not gonna say more than that though ^^0 See some tutorials, keep practicing, and you'll get better 6/10 | |
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ElenFNX Slifer Red
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Serbia
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-06, 13:21 | |
| I changed it now Is it better now? EDIT: Or maybe with this font: | |
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Aster Phoenix Destiny Keeper
Number of posts : 3970 Age : 29 Location : You Don't Need To Know
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-06, 16:13 | |
| Ooh. Nice I like it a lot better than the original. Personally, I like the font of the top one o f the two you posted. 8/10
~Aster Phoenix
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FullMetalAlchemist Ra Dorm Leader/Alchemical Master
Number of posts : 1859 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere on Earth
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| Subject: Re: My first work with Photoshop :D 2009-06-06, 16:35 | |
| Yeah the top one I like better. I think on Daedelus, the blue shading is a bit too dark. Otherwise, great! | |
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