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Maximillion Pegasus Creator of Duel Monsters
Number of posts : 1164 Location : Toon World
Miscellaneous DC: 4105
| | | | Kikyo Maaka Lv1 Troll
Number of posts : 883 Age : 31 Location : Canada
Miscellaneous DC: 635
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 14:05 | |
| Again, bad resizing on the Judai and Johan renders (they look like they're one render though), and you probably could have found a better Ra render (it also looks like it's not resized right as well). Backgrounds a little dull, could have a bit more life to it. Text could be a little lighter, the font is fine though. All in all, a 5/10. http://www.thedesignworld.com/ <-- not sure if I mentioned it before, but a good idea might to see some tutorials seeing as you're still new to this. That site has some pretty good tuts there | |
| | | Aster Phoenix Destiny Keeper
Number of posts : 3970 Age : 29 Location : You Don't Need To Know
Miscellaneous DC: 8545
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 16:59 | |
| Nice job, although I agree that they were a bit badly resized. Also, the background is a bit dull. I think the signature as a whole is a bit too dark. You should lighten it up a little and make the text a bit more noticeable. 6/10
~Aster Phoenix
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| | | Maximillion Pegasus Creator of Duel Monsters
Number of posts : 1164 Location : Toon World
Miscellaneous DC: 4105
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 17:58 | |
| Heres an Edited version taking more of your very helpful comments into effect. Please comment again. kikyo thank you for that website it helped me quite a bit as I am still exploring the tutorials there. Aster thank you as I tried to take most of your suggestions into consideration | |
| | | FullMetalAlchemist Ra Dorm Leader/Alchemical Master
Number of posts : 1859 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere on Earth
Miscellaneous DC: 780
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 18:04 | |
| Hmm. I still think the background is a bit too dark. Also, the bottom right of ra looks like it has nothing, except solid coloring. Although much better than the other one. You're getting better! | |
| | | Aster Phoenix Destiny Keeper
Number of posts : 3970 Age : 29 Location : You Don't Need To Know
Miscellaneous DC: 8545
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 18:07 | |
| Well, the text is a lot better than before. Personally, I think the bottom right of Ra is a bit too bright now. Judai/Jaden and Johan/Jesse look better than they did before. Still a little blurry to me. Better than the first 7/10
~Aster Phoenix
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| | | Kikyo Maaka Lv1 Troll
Number of posts : 883 Age : 31 Location : Canada
Miscellaneous DC: 635
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 22:31 | |
| Looking better Judai and Johan look okay now, same with Ra. Though on the side, Judai and Johan look ishly blurry, but meh Text is better, background looks a little more lively. You're improving, just keep working at it 7/10 | |
| | | Ace Gentleman
Number of posts : 1014 Age : 114
Miscellaneous DC: 100
| Subject: Re: My 3rd Signature 2009-06-07, 23:07 | |
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